I can hear galloping horses and rolling carriages.I see that lonely girl dipping Her feet in the water.I can feel the sheeps fluffy wool.I smell the smoke from the chimney.I taste the sugar in the carriages.
Nice work Dekan. You have really studied that picture carefully and used your senses to describe it. I wonder if you could try to start your sentences without using the word 'I' ?
Hi Dekan I like your story. Next time use some more wow words From Harry.
ReplyDeleteNice work Dekan. You have really studied that picture carefully and used your senses to describe it. I wonder if you could try to start your sentences without using the word 'I' ?
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